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[姓名職務與特點] Li Min, monitor of Class 1 Grade 2 (同位語), is healthy and lively. [成績與愛好] She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing.
[事跡] When she came to school, she had much difficulty with English, but through hard work she made great progress. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Min is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help others.
1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概況)
2. appearance, character (外表、性格)
3. Education (教育背景)
4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (經歷、生平)
5. evaluation (評價)
1. 職位頭銜： 用同位語, 年齡性別與家境也可用同位語。如：
⑴ Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving (一位跳水的世界冠軍), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.(同位語)
⑵ I’m Li Hui, a girl of seventeen(一個17歲的女孩子).
⑶ Abraham Lincoln， the son of a poor family (一個貧苦家庭的兒子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. 亞伯拉汗·林肯, 于1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。
2. 介紹出生: 介紹出生的時間、地點和家境用分詞結構, 使文章更簡潔。如：
⑴ Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980 (1980年出生于上海), is a world famous basketball player.
⑵ Born of a poor clerk ’s family(出生在一個貧困的小職員家庭中), Charles Dickens had little schooling.
3. 描寫外貌: 巧用with短語。如：
My English teacher is a beautiful lady, with long hair and big eyes (她長著兩只大眼睛, 留著長發).
4. 生平事跡： 盡量用復合句、并列句、非謂語動詞短語和倒裝等高級語句。如：
⑴ In his life, he got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award (其中包括獲得“2005感動中國年度人物”的稱號).(定語從句)
⑵ In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal(在他打破世界紀錄并獲得金牌之后), he became the idol of the youth.(分詞短語)
⑶ Not only does he show interest in science(他不但對科學極有興趣), but also he has a gift for music.(倒裝句式)
寫成長經歷請按時間順序。如when he was a small boy， at (the age of) five， in 2006， a year later等。
5. 評價: 盡量運用短語。如：
Lei Feng set a good example to us (給我們樹立了一個良好的榜樣), so all the people show great respect to him (很敬重他).
此外, 以下短語很有用, 請熟讀背誦：
⑴ be admitted into a key university 考上重點大學
⑵ major in law主修法律
⑶ get a master’s degree 獲得碩士學位
⑷ graduate from Harvard University畢業于哈佛大學
⑸ win the first prize獲得一等獎
⑹ win a gold medal贏得一枚金牌
⑺ win the Nobel Prize 獲得諾貝爾獎
⑻ become a world champion 成為世界冠軍
⑼ set a good example to us 給我們樹立了良好的榜樣
(10) be highly thought of受到好評
(11) be awarded a medal for因……而獲得獎章
(12) be awarded the title of獲得……稱號
(13) devote ...to ... 把……專用于/奉獻給
參考詞匯: singing contest 歌詠比賽
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest regardless of the hot weather.
While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she took great pains to search, select and managed to find the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts， we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Apart from being warm-hearted and caring a lot about the class, Li Yue often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example to us, so she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.